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  洪恩第一次大擂台已经决出胜负。这次大擂台的题目是把一份中文的简历译写成英文,在写作栏目的前几期内容中我们已经介绍了写简历的有关知识,在这次比赛中我们收到了大量的来信,并挑选了一些有代表性的作文配上了外教的批改和评注,十分有价值,相信会对你的写作大有裨益。   下面选出本次大赛擂主的文章供大家欣赏,如果你有兴趣的话可以到轻松英语主页点大擂台观看所有的征文及其评注。

  外国专家的忠告:

  Remember, first impressions are very important in a resume. The Human Resource Officer of a company will be reading scores of these resumes and will become tired of seeing the same words over and over. You must impress him with the appearance of your page and your competency in the English language immediately. There must be no spelling mistakes at all. Spelling mistakes show that you were not careful enough to use a dictionary, that you are not a careful person. Write your objective in seeking a position with his company and the reasons you are the right person for this position. Do not be embarassed to write that you are excellent in certain abilities if you think that you are. Let him ask you for an interview and then decide for himself if what you write is true. Your first objective is to obtain the all-impotant interview with the HR officer. It is during this face-to-face interview that you will be able to demonstrate your competency for the job.


简历(中文原文):

              简 历

 个人资料
   姓名:张红           性别:女
   出生日期:1976年5月21日    婚姻状况:未婚
   籍贯:北京
   联系地址:北京海淀区中关村路567号
        邮编:100001
        电话:67891234

 教育背景
   ·1994-1998年,北京大学中文系,获学士学位
   ·1991-1994年,北京四中

 工作经历
  ·1998年7月-1999年6月,在《大众生活》杂志社从事编辑工作
  ·1999年6月至今,在北京ABC网络有限公司从事网站内容编辑工作

 英语水平
  ·在校期间通过国家大学英语六级考试(CET-6)
  ·能够熟练地阅读英语文章,具有一定的听说能力

 自我评价
  ·严谨,勤奋,条理性强,有创造力,爱好广泛。具有深厚的文字功底和丰富的编辑
   工作经验,能够迅速适应环境,乐于接受挑战。

 求职意向
  ·网站或媒体的编辑与策划工作。

 






 


 

          专家点评
· use a consistent style
· be careful not to use too many words where one will do
· you have a good vocabulary and use it correctly

 






 


 



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